While editing chapter 12, I decided to divide it into two chapters. As I rework the manuscript in preparation for pitching the novel in August, I will probably do the same with a few other chapters. And then there's that missing chapter I still need to write.
|Commerson's Dolphins | Image by W. Gewait|
For now, I've polished the new chapter 12 enough to post.
Amelia, Corinne, Felicia and Carole ready themselves for the trip back to Breckenworth Mansion with baby Sarah. Back in New England, a visit with the baby's namesake shocks the Breckenworths as well as softens Carlisle's gruff personality.
Read Chapter 12.
Need to catch up?
Read Chapters 1-10
Read Chapter 11
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DISCLAIMER: Some material in the novel Amelia is explicit and is not appropriate or recommended for young readers.
Micki Bare, mother of three, wife, daughter & writer is the author of Thurston T. Turtle children's books.